Dear Robert Service,
I am 14 years old and i read
your poem "Schizophrenic"... I like it, really i do and its meaningful but the thing is - it doesnt explain Schizophrenia in the least bit, if you want to know more about Schizophrenia visit: www.Schizophrenia.com .... your poem discribes something more like, dissociative identity disorder (DID) if it were to describe a problem like that, which i really dont think it should. Its a happy poem, in my opinion. Sorry If I'm being critical but I'm trying to be constructive! email me if you have any questions or comments!
I am 14 years old and i read
your poem "Schizophrenic"... I like it, really i do and its meaningful but the thing is - it doesnt explain Schizophrenia in the least bit, if you want to know more about Schizophrenia visit: www.Schizophrenia.com .... your poem discribes something more like, dissociative identity disorder (DID) if it were to describe a problem like that, which i really dont think it should. Its a happy poem, in my opinion. Sorry If I'm being critical but I'm trying to be constructive! email me if you have any questions or comments!