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At Pleasure Bay

Robert Pinsky

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Added by: richard
Too long and very unfocused.

Basically the poem just rambles.

Some interesting lines within the poem that could become poems

themselves. In this case the parts are

greater than the whole.

The fact that poem is all one stanza

doesn't help either.

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