Soft rustling rhymes
the pattern is ABCD BADC
many people don't realize they are
hearing "head" r/w "side"
"knees" rhyme with "images"
"altar" r/w "centaur"
they only hear the final
"wine" r/w "line"
you should fix the capitalization in line six: At Pallas Athene's side. At present it reads At pallas Athene's Side.
One of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. Should be more like it.
the pattern is ABCD BADC
many people don't realize they are
hearing "head" r/w "side"
"knees" rhyme with "images"
"altar" r/w "centaur"
they only hear the final
"wine" r/w "line"
you should fix the capitalization in line six: At Pallas Athene's side. At present it reads At pallas Athene's Side.
One of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. Should be more like it.