this poem
i call it
the best that He wrote
true story
he tells
his life at the moment
and the punch
at the end
lord knows
was he smiling?
2004-07-27
Added by: AdAm MuNsOn
This ones all about the contrast. Going from the peacefulness of bird watching to the violence of the word fucker in less than 50 words. It's beautifully sarcastic
you misunderstood
2005-02-28
Added by: leslie
this poem is all about writer's block.
contrast??
2006-11-22
Added by: Misty
Its not contrast, and yeah he was smiling because he knew that whatever he typed.. you would think it was beautiful even though it means nothing. Good on the writers block.. but still, nothing
i call it
the best that He wrote
true story
he tells
his life at the moment
and the punch
at the end
lord knows
was he smiling?